Wonder essay draft 5

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In life making fun of people does not help you (kid being laughed at).  It just makes things worse for you and other people. A boy with a deformed face named Auggie ( a kid with a deformed face), with strong character traits like his perseverance (mucle kid)and  being made fun of.  R.J Palacio Wrote wonder because just like her kids saw a boy with a deformed face.  She does not want us to scream and be scared just like her kids( a kid that is scared).  R.J Palacio at least wants us to not judge someone by what they look like, she wants us to talk to them first at least say hi(kid saying hi).   I think Wonder by R.J palacio is about the power of perseverance can help people get through hard times. (cant get passed this wall)       

               Throughout the story kids make fun of his face like the character Julian, who started a war with Auggie.(kid staring at each other in a mad face)  It’s if you touch him you get the plague( a kid with a decease) .  A lot of people were on Julian side, and only some on Auggie's side.  Most girls were on both sides.  Auggie didn't really care and got used(a kid ignoring another kid) to it than the other kids started to get closer to Auggie after 2/3 months(kids coming friends with a kid with a deformed face).  That shows that he has very good perseverance and does not care what other people say and just keeps driving.(kid running)      



Later in the story, Auggie went on a field trip to a nature center and stayed there for 3 days(kid sleeping in cabin in a forest).  At the end of day 3 they watched a movie outside on a huge screen(kids watching a movie outside ON A HUGE SCREEN). Jack had to go the bathroom and the line to the bathroom was long so they went into the forest.(kid behind a tree) After they were done and they ran into some 7^th and 8^th graders.(small kids against big kids) The 7^th and 8^th graders shined a flash light on Auggie and they screamed “Monster!)”  and the 7^th and 8^th graders tried to beat up Auggie, Jack and few(kids shining a flash ona kid with a deformed face other kids (named Miles, Amos and Henry)(older kids running after younger kids).   This makes Auggie feel different.( a kid depressed)  Then the 7^th and 8^th graders started chasing them and after they ran away Auggie even made two new friends that were mean to him before (Miles and Henry and a little bit Amos).( little kids fighting back)  They could not find their way back because it was so dark.(kids lost)  When they got back and they could see Auggie saw that the 7^th and 8^th graders took off his hearing aids.          

By the end of the story Auggie won the Henry ward Beecher medal for being a really good friend. (kid winning award) “Using his quiet strength” to lift up kid’s hearts and his perseverance.  "I started paying attention, for real now, to what he was saying." “The strength of one’s courage" he repeated quietly, nodding (mucle man)and smiling".  Auggie really started paying attention to what Mr. Tushman was saying.  All the kids cheered for him when he went up to the stage everybody liked him because he was a good friend (Kid being surrounded by kids)accept Julian of course still didn't like Auggie and at least Julian went to a different school. ( kid walking away)

Now, as I think about the power of perseverance, I realize that the power of perseverance can help people get through stuff you cant do. but when you use the power of perseverance you can do anything.  (superman)